Interesting
I like it. The animation quality isn't the best, but it's still good. Try to have more creative colors and more detailed characters. And if you're going to do gradients, try to do it as subtle as possible. The storyline was overall good, but it was kind of hard to tell what was going on. There should be more sound effects, without background music. I mean, the song was good, but next time add sound effects with the music, and if you can't hear it, then you should just remove the music entirely. I know you can do better if you tried.