e-lord's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flunk-combat 2]

Meh...

Listen, random violence on newgrounds is WAY OVERDONE. And this isn't the best video of random violence. Try to think of a more original concept, and work on those motion tweens, make them look more realistic, and add more detail. I know you can do better if you tried.

-e-lord

Wyattfilms responds:

Ehh...

[Clayland - Killer]

Lol

That was better, you weren't copying Knox ENTIRELY, but you really have some people live, and not kill off everybody. Other than that, it was good!

-e-lord

TechFlash responds:

thanks.

[Spatula Man]

Nice

Hey, that was really funny. Nice spider-man parody there ;)

[StopMotion Racers!]

WTF? I wasn't expecting that!

I thought stop-motion racers was dead! Wow, Tech! That was good. Keep this up, this was good, I have a feeling this could win a portal award! Oh, and BTW, nice touch with Sonicmega, he's working for one of my movies, and he's awesome!

TechFlash responds:

thanks, i'm looking forward to your movie!

[Clayland - Psychic Steve]

Probably your best work!

Seriously Tech, you've outdone yourself. The humor was hysterical, somewhat predictable. But I really think you could be ultra-super-popular, but your movies copy Knox in one way: random killing. Please stop with all the random killing. I mean its OK sometimes, but not in this movie. Try to develop plots without killing/impaling/severe wounding. Also, the lip syncing was good, but these characters need to have moods. Are they sad? Happy? Mad? Looking for a purpose in life? Otherwise, it's impossible to tell. Keep up the good work.

[Things I Hate]

Heh, nice

I liked it, very original concept, and those things annoy me too. I really like your work, keep it up!

RoobyKillAll responds:

Thanks man. Will do.

[Ev's OMG b-day!]

All right...

That was really weird. It was pretty original, so that's where the style came from. The graphics weren't that good at all, really, work harder on those. The people sounded like the same guy doing the same voice for everyone. It wasn't that funny, it didn't get the whole purpose of tthe movie. I do like the animation style though.

DAGamesOfficial responds:

meh, like I say, not my best work, the next one will be better than the others by far!

[Clayland - Skateboarding]

Score!

Well, lets see here... in 2005, you wanted to be like knox, and made some all right movies. In 2006 you improved, by having human characters. In 2007, you use lipsyncing. This could be the year where you become so famous that you could be in the clay section! Anyway, my suggestions: the lipsyncing was good for a start, but you're not freemont yet. You might want to make the lipsyncing better by making the changes in mouths more subtle. Maybe you should make more mouths. Also, please don't do that whole "random shooting" thing. That's kind of ripping off knox. If you are going to do that, I'd suggest making the animation better. And you might want to avoid the Cactaur sounding voice for your characters. Use more normal voices, and people won't say, "Go through puberty, 10-year old". And I love how you used other props (ex. Skating ramp). Another thing is that their eyes and mouths were way too big. Try to make them smaller, otherwise they look more cartoony, and I know your going for the whole "human" characters. In additon, try to make their clothes more detailed (pockets, text , etc). One last peice of advice. Their mouths looked like they were bulging out. Don't make their mouths bulge out so much. You can be better than knox if you just work at it more!

[What I want for Xmas]

Very good.

I like it, it's very good. Probably one of your best. Keep up the good work!

[Clayland - Christmas]

They just keep getting better and better!

Wow, that was impressive. I really liked your claymation, it was very funny. The preloader was good, I really enjoyed that. The intro was kind of overdone, please don't have an over done intro, because people would be like "OMG I WANNA SEE THE MOVIE NOT SOEM INTRO." I see that you got your friend to be in this, it's a nice cameo for a change. It did seem like Merry exks Mus, which is the Knox's and Tox's Christmas special. Overall, I think you could be as good as Knox someday, the only thing I feel you need to improve upon is one thing: sound. If you wanna do voicese yourself, thats fine. But in between each audio clip, there's always a pause. Try to avoid the pause as much as possible, because it keeps viewers anticipating on what the person is going ot say next. Your animations have always been funny, and the animation has always been good, and your claymen are good too. Keep up the good work.

-e-lord