e-lord's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario rapper]

Not a bad idea, but...

You used too many gradients, and the animation was just simple tweening, and it was so short. Fix on those problems and you'll have a better movie.

sunTyro responds:

ok..

[Congé.]

Another strange, but well done flash by Mechabloby

Although the "random FBF" genre has been played to death on Newgrounds, this movie actually turned out to be very well done. I like the scenes with the text the most. It's a very good technique. The art is unique and the animation is very fluent (better than a lot of overrated shit I see these days, like LegendaryFrog), and very fluent. Although there is no story, it doesn't affect the movie's grade, considering it doesn't need one (The YuYu, anyone?).

I give this movie a: 10/10 Excellent.

Keep up the great work.

Mechabloby responds:

Will do! :)

[Clayland - Scissors]

Incredibly funny.

Knox is kind of heading down the drain (I didn't like Pancake Mines that much), so you brought me something funnier than pancake mines. However, it may have not been as well done, but I still laughed. You're no Knox, but you are very good. Keep it up man!

-e-lord

TechFlash responds:

thanks elord. Funny, I laughed my ass off at Pancake Mines.

[The Random One]

Weird, but amuzing

This movie was alright, it could be better. The graphics were quite good, but I recommend not using jpegs. The whole concept of being totally random is somewhat overdone, but the method it used to make it random was done well. The explosion was good for the violence, although it was pointless, the rest of the stuff was okay. It didn't make me laugh that much, mainly because it was too short, and not so much funny stuff came up. Work on your jokes a bit more.

I give this movie a 7.4/10: Pretty good, but lacks something

-e-lord

KingKilo responds:

wow, thanks to all of you.
(And I know what it lacks)
A FINAL FIGHT!

thanks e-lord.

[Flunk-combat 2]

Meh...

Listen, random violence on newgrounds is WAY OVERDONE. And this isn't the best video of random violence. Try to think of a more original concept, and work on those motion tweens, make them look more realistic, and add more detail. I know you can do better if you tried.

-e-lord

Wyattfilms responds:

Ehh...

[Clayland - Killer]

Lol

That was better, you weren't copying Knox ENTIRELY, but you really have some people live, and not kill off everybody. Other than that, it was good!

-e-lord

TechFlash responds:

thanks.

[StopMotion Racers!]

WTF? I wasn't expecting that!

I thought stop-motion racers was dead! Wow, Tech! That was good. Keep this up, this was good, I have a feeling this could win a portal award! Oh, and BTW, nice touch with Sonicmega, he's working for one of my movies, and he's awesome!

TechFlash responds:

thanks, i'm looking forward to your movie!

[Things I Hate]

Heh, nice

I liked it, very original concept, and those things annoy me too. I really like your work, keep it up!

RoobyKillAll responds:

Thanks man. Will do.

[Ev's OMG b-day!]

All right...

That was really weird. It was pretty original, so that's where the style came from. The graphics weren't that good at all, really, work harder on those. The people sounded like the same guy doing the same voice for everyone. It wasn't that funny, it didn't get the whole purpose of tthe movie. I do like the animation style though.

DAGamesOfficial responds:

meh, like I say, not my best work, the next one will be better than the others by far!

[The Snowball Cartoon]

Interesting

I like it. The animation quality isn't the best, but it's still good. Try to have more creative colors and more detailed characters. And if you're going to do gradients, try to do it as subtle as possible. The storyline was overall good, but it was kind of hard to tell what was going on. There should be more sound effects, without background music. I mean, the song was good, but next time add sound effects with the music, and if you can't hear it, then you should just remove the music entirely. I know you can do better if you tried.

Jimtopia responds:

Well, thx for a detailed review. Well, I tried to make the gradient's subtle, but it's hard to hide it when everything else is white! (lol) anyway, well thx for taking the time to review!